1. Prospect writing sample (target voice)
Paste 150+ words the prospect actually wrote. The box is pre-filled with sample data embedded in this file, not a real person. Replace it with your own text and everything below recomputes.
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2. Your draft cold email
Pre-filled with sample data: a deliberately stiff draft, so the transform is visible. Replace it with your own draft.
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3. Before / after against the measured targets
| Metric | Sample target | Draft before | Rewritten | Delta vs target |
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Delta is rewritten minus measured target; a green delta is inside tolerance. Sentence length spread (standard deviation) is a diagnostic, not a target: the mechanical passes never drive it, it only moves as a side effect of splitting and merging.
4. Rewritten draft
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5. Sentence length distribution
Real histogram: sentence lengths in words, counted from the sample (green) and from the rewritten draft (amber).